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Spoken Words, Broken Chains

From the "Student becomes Teacher" dept.

The Iowa Writers Retreat is a wondrous thing. An opportunity to break with the mundane, to bask in the sunlight of bright sons and daughters of the Word. Words written, spoken, felt, crafted, aided, abetted, and lived.

At last year’s retreat I was giving a presentation describing my process as a writer of words and music. There were perhaps 20 people at the session most of whom I did not know (yet). You never know who’s out there listening. What they might be receiving from what you’re giving. I do know that it is your duty to give the truth without regard for how it may be received.

After the presentation was over, a slender young man with a wide smile came forward..…..to ask questions. Sabur Mohammed is his name and so curious was he that he reminded me of me as a young wannabe journalist. Seeking to know how to ask the right questions! Hungry to know the way of the interview. More than music, more than words, seeking to understand the essence of Story!

That was a year ago.

Yesterday at the Saturday version of the Des Moines Art Festival I witnessed a collection of truly brave, new voices (including Sabur) seeking, challenging. Tough and tender talking ‘bout everything from poems to pythons to peer acceptance to pure redemption.

Sabur Mohammed, The slender young man with the wide smile approached me last summer at Okoboji with a request to stand next to my old fire. It took a few weeks (months?) before we actually met but when we did, we began “trading fours” like ‘Bird and Diz’ at a late night 1940’s jam session.

Yesterday, however, the son broke through the clouds. Spreading ‘son shine’ to the assembled. As Sabur’s truth emerged, the finger snaps and ‘amen’ choruses arose from the audience. An audience vibrating sympathetically with the finely articulated words and rhythm emanating from the stage. Not with rage but with an eye (and an ear) toward horizons of realization releasing pent up frustration. Darkness dispelled and compelled to disperse as words, woven into verse told the truth as Lymon might have seen it.

Sabur Mohammed, the young man who approached with a question was now a partner in teaching. A son of Hip Hop digging on the fathers of Bebop. A line unbroken finding his place in the Caravan of forever.

Before yesterday, he was a student. Today, I report on the emergence of a teacher. His was a short, but meaning-full lesson from a griot of the future. Listen well, listen between the lines as he honors his mentors (including our friend Caleb Rainey, The Negro Artist). This tradition of truth-telling endures, thrives and drives us into a new reality. A prosperity of thought, if you will.

No better way to transcend the Trumpian than to immerse ourselves in the words of truth as rendered by the youth. Thanks to the Des Moines Arts Festivals’ Literary Arts team for bringing in such a diverse collection of present and future giants for us to enjoy. From pythons (thanks Paul) to poetry, it was a wonderful respite from the mundane.

Some old guy hangin’ with two reporters of the heart, Sabur and Caleb. [photo by Paula Egan]

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Jane Burns: The Crossover, Des Moines

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Art Cullen: Art Cullen’s Notebook, Storm Lake

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Debra Engle: A Whole New World, Madison County

Daniel Finney, Paragraph Stacker, Des Moines

Arnold Garson: Second Thoughts, Okoboji and Sioux Falls

Julie Gammack: Julie Gammack’s Iowa Potluck, Des Moines and Okoboji

Joe Geha: Fern and Joe, Ames

Jody Gifford: Benign Inspiration, West Des Moines

Rob Gray: Rob Gray’s Area, Ankeny

Nik Heftman: The Seven Times, Los Angeles and Iowa

Beth Hoffman: In the Dirt, Lovilia

Iowa Capital Dispatch, an alliance with IWC

Dana James: Black Iowa News, Iowa

Chris Jones, Chris’s Substack, Iowa City

Pat Kinney: View from Cedar Valley, Waterloo

Fern Kupfer: Fern and Joe, Ames

Robert Leonard: Deep Midwest: Politics and Culture, Bussey

Letters from Iowans, Iowa

Darcy Maulsby: Keepin’ It Rural, Calhoun County

Tar Macias: Hola Iowa, Iowa

Alison McGaughey, The Inquisitive Quad Citizen, Quad Cities

Kurt Meyer: Showing Up, St. Ansgar

Vicki Minor, Relatively Minor, Winterset

Wini Moranville: Wini’s Food Stories, Des Moines

Jeff Morrison: Between Two Rivers, Cedar Rapids

Kyle Munson: Kyle Munson’s Main Street, Des Moines

Jane Nguyen: The Asian Iowan, West Des Moines

John Naughton: My Life, in Color, Des Moines

Chuck Offenburger: Iowa Boy Chuck Offenburger, Jefferson and Des Moines

Barry Piatt: Piatt on Politics Behind the Curtain, Washington, D.C.

Dave Price: Dave Price’s Perspective, Des Moines

Steve Semken, The Pulse of a Heartland Publisher, North Liberty

Macey Shofroth: The Midwest Creative, Norwalk

Larry Stone: Listening to the Land, Elkader

Mary Swander: Mary Swander’s Buggy Land, Kalona

Mary Swander: Mary Swander’s Emerging Voices, Kalona

Cheryl Tevis: Unfinished Business, Boone County

Ed Tibbetts: Along the Mississippi, Davenport

Jason Walsmith, The Racontourist, Earlham

Kali White VanBaale, 988: Mental Healthcare in Iowa, Bondurant

Teresa Zilk: Talking Good, Des Moines

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